Please

Please don’t leave me.

I am afraid that if you do,

I will be left alone

with nothing but bad thoughts

and a scarred body that will haunt me forever,

just constantly telling me everything I have done wrong with my life.

 

Please don’t leave me alone.

I can see them coming for me in the distance.

The more you walk away,

the clearer they become in my view.

Their voices are getting louder,

so loud that covering my ears does nothing but make my ears red with irritation.

My force field of safety is breaking, and the bad thoughts are getting in.

 

Please come back.

I miss you already. Everything around me is melting away

Everything is turning black as depression fills my body.

My body is tired of fighting this war or emotions.

And I am wondering what the use is anymore.

 

You aren’t coming back.

Who am I kidding.

I messed everything up,

and I know this,

but maybe there is something I can do to fix it.

 

Please, let me leave.

I don’t need you anymore.

Just like you didn’t need me.

I've made up my mind. 

Author's Note

this is a rough draft of the rough draft. It's not finished because i don't know which direction to take for the last verse. lol but what do you think of it so far????

Reviews

[despitegreathands]

While I don't know much about poetry I do know what I like and I like the heavy amount of truth in this poem. It's very true about relationships.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told the true logic of love. We need, we want than we push away. I like the way the poem tone changed. Love can make us crazy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote