Replayed Kisses.

I need a title... When I wrote it I didn't realize I titled it my ex boyfriends name. haha Now, I don't want to public embarrass him so I need a new name... helppp?????

It has been months

since you’ve banished me

from your life.

Months since the pain all started,

and has yet to leave.

Until today.

Tonight I lay in my bed,

alone,

and I replay your kisses that once sent a happiness through my body

that no one else could ever send.

Your touches against my skin,

they burn with a passion

that I yearn for.

It is the fact that I am just laying here,

in need of your touch of warm skin

that seems to hurt the most.

Because I would much rather hate you forever,

than have to live my life

loving a person that will never feel the same for me in return.

 

 

-S.L.S.  

Author's Note

How is the title? Good? bad? I can do better? thoughts? lol Please.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Many good statements in the poem that can be used for a title. I like the words "I replay your kisses". I like the flow of thoughts and the honest emotions in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Samantha Lynn]

hhhmmm.. Reply isn't bad... I may do something with that. Thanks! :)

[Cole Hayley]

I really like the title, its pretty creative, so is the poem. Great work.

[Joshua Hunter]

This is very good. It is a poem I can totally relate to as I was at this point a few times in my life. Very good!

[Krystle Lewallen]

Very poetic. For the title, How about Scorch. Scorch, having a double meaning, because this boy has burnt your soul and your body. Does that make sense to you? Unless you are keeping Replayed Kisses, then just ignore that idea. :)

[Night]

This is brilliantly heartbreaking....

[Dark Tower]

A lot of strong emotions in this poem. Very beautifully expressive. As for the title.....Complicated.