Get me Dry

I went to write and this came out. I don't know what it means about me or what it doesn't mean but I would love for you all to help me decipher this. :)

There is a sadness that fills the entirety that is my body and mind,

and I just don’t know what to do with this filling pain.

It is clouding my judgments,

a thunderstorm that blocks the light connecting the source from the destination.

I don’t know what to do about this, you know?

The rain never leaves,

and I am wet from head to toe with the depths of my mind.

Black skies.

Dark thoughts.

The constant pitter-patter against the top of my head is starting to hurt,

and I can only seem to think of one way to get dry.  

 

-S.L.S.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is a sad poem. Many reasons to write a sad poem. Hearing of a bad incident or bad memory appear. I like the yearning in the poem to forget and leave the sadness behind. The good description gave life and purpose to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Sometimes when we keep our feelings inside, the storms just keep coming, keeping us locked into that rainy view, I think this is a good release to clear the weather, a start anyway, nicely pen'd.

[Dark Tower]

Love the rhyme scheme, it is incredibly unique. The emotions are powerful yet subtly expressed. Best piece I've read in a long time. Well written.