5 Lives

interesting concept clone human double, could get highly elaborate, this concept requires a high degree of plot scientific sophistication, Ch 3 is a sharp turn from the original premise, (reads like an interlude, possibly be better as a prologue as in one of your other writes, i'm interested in writing a highly sophisticated novel mixing reality with biblical truth(s), keep toying with the idea of writing a work, (masterpiece, high ideals) similar in scope as, J.R.R. Tolkien, i want to create a work readers will want to keep on their shelves and pass on to others, i've got a goal time frame in mind, meanwhile honing my skills on this site and on https://theprose.com, I DO LIKE what you have presented in your writing pieces, you demonstrate a science fiction minded, metaphysical leaning which i totally get and enjoy, i totally dig science fiction which for me requires an abundance of scientific data jargon combined with the physics of science and tons of character dialogue, flashbacks, etc., i've got some ideas which i have not quite yet brought to the threshold of deeper fruition, ouch: in this piece, "5 Lives," i like the concept in general - i see a need for a sharper focus, more elaboration of your character, setting for a killer plot which i get, CLONE, . . . i could play with it myself and show you what i would do with it, but i'm not comfortable with the clone thing, it would be fun and productive, but i need a PASSION for the topic or story line, my pieces
posted are a stab of searching for that passion niche which will spark/produce that crazy classic novel i envision writing, I am flattered with your comments toward my work, i flatter myself when i read some of my work back to myself, all ego aside, i trust your diagnostic comments in this regard and this gives me impetus to hit the mark and fulfill reader's thirst for Good Literature - a very big fill for me, thank you zane bova, friend, and thanks for reading my works

Posted 8 Years Ago

I wish I could write like that. I have a tendency to make a month a second. I think your doing great work. Thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago

interesting concept clone human double, could get highly elaborate, this concept requires a high degree of plot scientific sophistication, Ch 3 is a sharp turn from the original premise, (reads like an interlude, possibly be better as a prologue as in one of your other writes, i'm interested in writing a highly sophisticated novel mixing reality with biblical truth(s), keep toying with the idea of writing a work, (masterpiece, high ideals) similar in scope as, J.R.R. Tolkien, i want to create a work readers will want to keep on their shelves and pass on to others, i've got a goal time frame in mind, meanwhile honing my skills on this site and on https://theprose.com, I DO LIKE what you have presented in your writing pieces, you demonstrate a science fiction minded, metaphysical leaning which i totally get and enjoy, i totally dig science fiction which for me requires an abundance of scientific data jargon combined with the physics of science and tons of character dialogue, flashbacks, etc., i've got some ideas which i have not quite yet brought to the threshold of deeper fruition, ouch: in this piece, "5 Lives," i like the concept in general - i see a need for a sharper focus, more elaboration of your character, setting for a killer plot which i get, CLONE, . . . i could play with it myself and show you what i would do with it, but i'm not comfortable with the clone thing, it would be fun and productive, but i need a PASSION for the topic or story line, my pieces
posted are a stab of searching for that passion niche which will spark/produce that crazy classic novel i envision writing, I am flattered with your comments toward my work, i flatter myself when i read some of my work back to myself, all ego aside, i trust your diagnostic comments in this regard and this gives me impetus to hit the mark and fulfill reader's thirst for Good Literature - a very big fill for me, thank you zane bova, friend, and thanks for reading my works

Posted 8 Years Ago

Ah so I've read these chapters (honestly I was expecting something lackluster) and I've fallen in love with your writing. Putting aside a few grammatical and punctuation errors, it was very interesting and enjoyable to read. Outstanding work!

Posted 8 Years Ago