Burn

I love your imagination; you have interesting names for the characters. Although the numbers made me feel that they are all robots, which confused me a bit. >w>;; I do love your visual representation of the environment they are all living in. I also appreciate that each character in some way, have their own voice; which helps me abbreviate and understand them.

I hope you continue writing into this story, I loved it!

When you're free please feel free to review the rest of my chapters of my story. Reading your work is also helping me, thank you so much!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I love your imagination; you have interesting names for the characters. Although the numbers made me feel that they are all robots, which confused me a bit. >w>;; I do love your visual representation of the environment they are all living in. I also appreciate that each character in some way, have their own voice; which helps me abbreviate and understand them.

I hope you continue writing into this story, I loved it!

When you're free please feel free to review the rest of my chapters of my story. Reading your work is also helping me, thank you so much!

Posted 8 Years Ago