Black Memories...

This story based on Destiney plays very important role in our life.

Black memories…

“Sometimes destiny plays with your life
you were not in a condition to give him fight.”
“So many things he gives you
that time you think destiny are the worst part of your life.”

Really, destiny has power. From that power, he could ugly turns into beauty and beauty turns into ugly. But, whatever he could with anyone that his good for him. He could beggar to richer and richer to a beggar. I know so many people don’t believe in destiny I was also one of them.
But, destiny plays with my life totally and I believe him from that time.

The story began when I was becoming a 5^th-time class monitor. My foot was not in land and my happiness touches the sky. Because, that time no one stands to opposite me for elections and I won easily. I was so happy. I ran very fast that day to share this good news with my love ones. I throw a small party to my friends. After that, I proud myself because my entire school never shows victory like this. My attitude was changed instantly. I thought that time no one could make like me. To see my changed behavior, my friends scared to talk with me. They maintain distance from me. But, I didn't care. My mom was little worried to see me in that attitude and told me always that to saw myself once and felt the difference between before you and after you. But, I was ignored to her words.

I don’t know why I was changed that time really. It wasn’t from that success because I already had so many achievements and make my name by itself. I had so many victories. I was also famous in my collage from my achievements and my good behavior too. I think my destiny plays with me that time. The bad time was coming soon my way from my silly mistakes.

“If you felt you are the king
  no one here to loosing you
     but, destiny began the game
          and plays with your silly mind.”

I make so many mistakes. I missed path from that time. It was the truly black time that I can never forget. Cyber was a trend in the market. My friend once saw me that magical place after over the class. To saw that magical place I lost my mind. I decided to taste it once but I stuck in the magic of computer games. Counter-strike, GTA Vice city, Spider-man, Mortal Combat so many games were there and goes every day to play this. First I was bunked that I wasn’t done before. Then I started to lie with my family. After that, I started bunk the school. Really where my mind was lost that time? I wasn’t able to think about anything. I enjoyed playing games so much there but, I lost everything that I achieved in my school like sand was loose from the hand. When I understand & trying to come on the right path. It was late. I lost everything with my reputation. That time I think,

“Why did this from my hand?
I ashamed myself
I hurt to everyone
my life looses like sand loose from hand.”

Then I go to school again but things were changed now. First when I go to class every friend was mine asked me out how goes your yesterday? Then we go to the canteen and make so many fun and noise. But, this time, they left me alone. All they have ignored my presence. Teachers were also changed first they called in front to tell the meaning what they learn. But for that they got someone. To saw all this I was fully hurt from my inside. Then that, they I couldn’t win in anything I felt like I was finished. I don’t understand what teacher teaches us. Everyone teases me now from that. Then I think like,

“When I was in top and successful,
everyone follows me
and tries to be like me
but, when I lose they think I am so fool.”

I was just failed. I never finished yet. I will show to them who am I? All thoughts were coming in my mind. I focused more on studies. I participate again now in everything. The victory was just one step ahead to me. At last, I won again. Everything that I lost came back to me but, now I know how its important steak on that place then won. No one is here for your care.

“Destiny teaches me valuable lesson

how could I forget

I learn so many things forms 

all that mess.”

Author's Note

Give me an honest review on it and don't hesitate to tell my mistakes also.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Arrogance before a fall springs to mind on this poem. Like a peacock in full bloom showing off and then something happens and he loses his plumage. And he feels so small and defenceless. And its true about destiny. It can change a the flick of a light switch. Either way for anyone. Good read and very interesting take on the subject at hand.

[Kunal Upreja]

I liked it !
A very nice message.. Keep it up!
And yes you can surely improve your grammatical mistakes, take care of that. :D

[Akki]

☺
Sure... thnx

[Dipanjan Dutta]

good work...strong vision and many lessons learnt...way to go mate

[Akki]

thanks bro!

[Dee]

Akki, it seems to me that this story teaches more than one lesson, and that people who read this story will learn something that will help them in their own lives. Great job.

[Akki]

Thanks Dee!
I think so.

[Southern_Writes]

Very strong message, good work!

[Akki]

Thank Kanas!

[A.marie.speaks]

Aside from the grammar the message itself is strong and meaningful. I think every person can relate to the topic of destiny. We all try and fail sometimes, it's the getting back up that matters!

[Akki]

Thank you so much !

[zunie frost]

i really love it !!!
“Destiny teaches me valuable lesson
how could I forget
I learn so many things forms
all that mess.”
this statement touches my heart real deep !!! thanks for sharing such a lovely work
you are awsome

[Akki]

Thank you Zunie for your lovely words!
Your words are really means to me a lot.
keep reviewing my work.

- Akki

[siddhi]

this is superb leaving some grammatical mistakes which i also make


kya baat hai

your frnd
siddhi

[Akki]

Thank you siddhi.
I agree but, I will improve it soon....

[siddhi]

i will to improve
thankyou
my pleasure
your frnd
siddhi

[Neytri]

There are lots of grammatical mistakes. You still can improve your grammar. Read and gather knowledge, nothing is impossible. I'm sure you'll write great pieces once this problem is sorted out.

[Akki]

Thank you for reviewing and I agree with your opinion... I try my best....