In my mind

This poem is on that which every thoughts in my mind when I written & after it. I hope it makes good.

I wrote stories & poems,

That understand every individual.

I imagine everything that I could,

I wrote something that I should.

But, review on it low,

my confidence now goes slow.

I try to understand my mistakes,

That I avoid to good content makes.

But, I don't know what I make mistakes,
There are so many views.
really I am good in this stake,
I hope some gives me reviews.

I wrote stories & poems,

That understand every individual.

Author's Note

Give me reviews on what you feel when reading my poems. If is it bad tell me that If it is good to tell me, What kind of your reviews doesn't matter but to get reviews that matter.

Reviews

[Solar]

The poem has a good subject - the need for a writer to get feedback and to be valued.

Perhaps the grammar needs to be checked - and then it will be an even better poem?

These are the best lines to my ear: 'I imagine everything that I could,
I wrote something that I should'

[Akki]

Thanks, Solar. I was written this poem when I didn't get any review so I frustrated and just write without any sense


I agreed to your opinion, but can you please tell me where I did mistakes in grammar.
I will be really helpful to me.

[Solar]

For example - in the first stanza -if it is stories and poems in plural, then you don't need 'a'. and it would be understand not understands. Other reviewers might help with the other lines. But do keep writing - you have very warm-hearted poems.

[Akki]

Thank you, Solar... I really like...