PETAL-WISE

if only humans could learn somehow

the language of nature's flowers

we would spend our lonely days

kneeling in the garden

laughing with roses

at one with asters

in touch with life

petal-wise

joyous

loved

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Reviews

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

well coined words. good designed literary words.

[KAREN]

This one sounded peaceful to me. Sitting in the rose garden feeling nothing but joy and love.

[Kevin Vorshak]

I, personally, enjoy gardening. Nice one, Sal

[Cherrie]

grace in motion and loved the images created

[Jesse N. Wall]

this poem made me smile quickly, thanks for that.
Excellent title.

[James Paulin]

in refined degrees
of poetry,
perfectly
we see
thee

[Barbara Walker]

Beautiful analogy! I agree! Nature shares itself with us in so many ways and I love that line "laughing with the roses".