where the ocean meets the sand...

where the ocean meets the sand...

A Poem by samaveiled
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please...

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 i can feel you covering me. as i throw one arm over my head, and lay entwined in your aura, i am happy. content even. where are you? i dont know...but you exist..and you are waiting for me. your eyes are filled with dreams.  running over to soak this grey reality, watering the seedlings of loves embrace...and where are you love? as my eyes slip closed, i see nothing. but i feel everything. i feel your longing, tugging my hair, and i feel your want, overwhelm you. and its all i can do, to wait patiantly. youll come to me, with your heart cradled in your eyes, and i will fall. drown inside you, joyfully giving myself up to you, and your warmth...i submit my love...and let you wash over me, like the ocean washes over the shores...

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 samaveiled


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This is a brilliant write.

Break up the ideas with 2 or 3 spaces.

My Favorite !
My Rating 100%

---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a beautiful and emotional write here, i like this write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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well, i am aspiring. i am here to learn and grow into a more organized mature writer. being published isnt a big deal to me. but, perfecting my art is. im here to focus, and be around some adult more .. more..

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