windows

 i am riding the skirts of your 

souls breath

to eternity. 

clinging for dear life...

id fallen 

(haphazardly)

through the windows 

that are your eyes. 

vainly grabbing for the sill-

my hand closed on

this breath

this life

this rope

with my hair in my eyes, 

i am swept away from where i was.

flown through the chaos

until i land somewhere strange...

(never letting go)

i veil myself in you, 

until i realize...

this is home!

as eternitys of thanks

pour from my moist eyes...

Reviews

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

Beautiful! This was an amazing read! " i am riding the skirts of your souls breath to eternity." These first lines had me hooked. You have quite the way with words!

[Collect-Eye]

imagine if you'd let go..