dark waters...

 

dark water, swirls around my feet. rising, rising, rising...and i cant move, just blindly hold my head up, keeping my fingers outstretched. try to hold myself together through these wracking sobs, and all i want are your arms, your warm breath on my neck. i cant swim, when im trembling this way. i cant sleep, and make it all go away. as even my tears are running from my gaze, i close my eyes and think of you. in that breif moment, im engulfed. water rising over my head, feet still cemented to the ground, and as the cold drowns my screams too, all is lost... 

Reviews

[C.J.]

good poe mone thing i would do would to be make your words a little larger because i have to squint to see them:) good write.