tipsy

tipsy

A Poem by samaveiled

tipsy

tipsy, and stumbling we fell into each other all whispered longings and desires held tightly bound by a chain of sweet dreams this breath of longing im scared to exhale... 

 

© 2008 samaveiled


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I can't seem to say it enough. I trully love your writing style. This one again feels like that rush some poets get when they are hit with inspiration so strong you can't seem to hold it long enough to get it on paper. Word vomit, if you will. No, no trust me it's a good thing!

This one evokes in me that strong sense of that first nervous quick brushing of elbows with the one you have a crush on in class that you just recently got attention from. You know...that initial flirting that drives you crazy. I think this is my favorite, despite how curt it is. I want to see more of it, but at the same time I know anymore would take away from it in the end just for my selfish needs hahaha. Does it all make sense?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I can't seem to say it enough. I trully love your writing style. This one again feels like that rush some poets get when they are hit with inspiration so strong you can't seem to hold it long enough to get it on paper. Word vomit, if you will. No, no trust me it's a good thing!

This one evokes in me that strong sense of that first nervous quick brushing of elbows with the one you have a crush on in class that you just recently got attention from. You know...that initial flirting that drives you crazy. I think this is my favorite, despite how curt it is. I want to see more of it, but at the same time I know anymore would take away from it in the end just for my selfish needs hahaha. Does it all make sense?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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well, i am aspiring. i am here to learn and grow into a more organized mature writer. being published isnt a big deal to me. but, perfecting my art is. im here to focus, and be around some adult more .. more..

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