adrift

adrift...

i can feel you out there. 

Drifting, like i am. 

Lost in the breezes of reality, 

dieing to hope again. 

To feel the sweetness of life, 

rediscovered. 

Your skin 

begging this breath 

to be found once again. 

I can feel you. 

And your not alone. 

Im not alone 

adrift 

on this 

sea of annoymity. 

Dreaming dreams of grace. 

Awaiting the arms of truth 

and the kiss of intamacy 

to awaken us. 

To link our fingers with finality. 

To tangle our hair together. 

Where? 

Under all these stars. 

I can taste you 

with tentative tentacules. 

Grasping the empty air...

always almost. 

Slipping threw my longing grasp. 

Truth, buried 

under the fireplace 

like bones of dought. 

I know your there. 

I whisper to you. 

Feel your lips on my throat. 

Can you feel me? 

Can we free ourselves? 

and allow beauty 

to roam 

unbounded 

in the pastures of thought 

breaking free 

with the force of truth? 

Cant you feel me? 

My arms are thrown open 

wide with hope. 

My breath is held 

with longing. 

My eyes closed in fear. 

I can feel you. 

Feel me. 

Hold me. 

Save me from myself. 

Tell me... 

Reviews

[Sound]

I really like this poem. It instills vivid emotions of falling. It's almost disorienting--in a good way, however. The words also create this deep sense of despiration. Loneliness. Depression. A sense of being lost. I love it.

One thing of note is that there are a few typos in the body of the poem. "dieing" instead of Dying, or intamacy instead of intimacy. dought instead of doubt. etc.

Good poem though.

[C.J.]

deep very good poem i like the last line i think that picture is a great thing to see.

[darkgurl]

These lines right here are so beautiful

"Dreaming dreams of grace.
Awaiting the arms of truth
and the kiss of intamacy to awaken us."

this write has emotion in it and is very well written, i like this write alot...Kim