Desire.

My very first poem that I wrote when I'm 13

It’s dark and cold,

It sends shivers to my bone,

The sight of the fire,

Brings power to my ire.

 

Bringing down the flames,

Inextinguishable flames,

And burn down the houses,

That shelters my regrets.

 

No more fear,

No more sorrows,

Now I stand,

In front of people’s shadows.

 

I shall not retreat.

I shall continue to advance.

Conquer and control,

All of my desires.

 

Author's Note

I'm not very good at poems, don't hesitate to tell any way to improve in poetry.

Reviews

[cfix]

I like this, don't be so hard on yourself
The poem is wonderful...

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Don't be so RUFF on urself. As we'd all say, just bleed from your heart. That's all there is to it.

[Shalini Dinesh]

this poem is nice to read, there is nothing called as a perfect poetry, its just words flowing from heart that touches another heart... follow the meter and flow, it will sound like good poetry..