Sorrow

sometimes things arent as they seem
what u think is reality might be a dream
and when someone pinches u, u try not to scream
cause u realized this life is really happening
so u take two steps back and try to react
to the things coming at u
the stress and what have yous
and i know u just wanna run away
and not deal with today
or even tomorrow
if its filled with hate, pain, and sorrow
someday you'll learn
that no matter which way u turn
you'll always get burned
cause this world is a black hole u cant avoid

Reviews

[NathanBlackie]

Very good portrayal of a moment.I liked how you said "u" instead of you

[samanthan]

thanks. i normally write in shorthand like that but it seems like everyone here spells everything out