A Love Story

You stole my heart
no
I gave it to you
because when I looked at you
it made my heart fly
you made me feel like a person
you made me smile
you made me laugh
you are wonderful
you are my world
as we sat and watched the sunset
I hoped that it would never end
that you would be mine forever
and I yours
it's perfect
you and I
were made to be together
I don't want a prince
I don't want to the princess
I'm fine with just sitting here
in jeans and t-shirt
with you
holding me
making my soul warm
i love you

It's funny
I thought you were different
you acted different
you talked different
you treated me different
but in the end
you weren't different at all
you left

I sat by the phone
waiting
but you never called
I guess you didn't feel the same
You didn't feel the butterflies
I still try
I want you so bad
I'll forget
I will do whatever you want
please love me
please
don't leave
stay
let me show you
how much I love you.

You stayed a little bit
of course
you are a guy
you want proof
I gave you proof
but after
you still left

I guess I wasn't good enough
I wish I was
I stay up all night
thinking about what I could have done different
what I could have done to get you to stay
I guess I just wasn't good enough
to keep you
because you will leave
no matter what I do.
just like the others
but you meant so much more
then all of them
I'd trade all of them
for you
but it doesn't matter
because I wasn't good enough
so leave
but remember
i love you

Reviews

[Robyn]

Another great write!
You have done a lovely job expressing your feelings in words. I can feel it all

[Tia Sanchez]

Love certainly hurts, and I can somewhat read the pain through this. Nice read.

[Mauricio Montoya]

This piece is fire and ice it may need some fine tuning, but over all I like how it comes together from start to finish. Nice work well done.