Aquamarine

Aquamarine

A Poem by SamanthaGalli

I feel like nothing has meaning anymore.

I travel 20 miles to the shore to watch aqua waves roll in. 

I do it to feel peace but it only brings pain.

With every wave that crashes, the more empty I feel. 

Listless eyes, weak bones, shattered heart, and a barren mind.

The waves are just a reminder that I am torn apart inside.

Being alone is finally getting to me, climbing its way into my soul. 

© 2016 SamanthaGalli


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I love the ocean. A place to gather our thoughts.
"The waves are just a reminder that I am torn apart inside.
Being alone is finally getting to me, climbing its way into my soul. "
The above lines are true. The ocean can heal us and teach us. We can be okay. Thank you Samantha for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Deep, and powerful. Sad comes in waves so using the ocean imagery was well done. Beautifully written. Hard on the heart.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"With every wave that crashes, the more empty I feel" this line really struck to me... I can feel how lonely it feels to be in a situation like that... "listless eyes, weak bones, shattered heart and a barren mind" reflects the the true pain and loneliness of the Poet's heart... Sometimes loneliness feels more heartbreaking in the places of serenity... Excellent work...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on May 23, 2016
Last Updated on May 23, 2016
Tags: summer, lonely, alone, sad, empty

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SamanthaGalli
SamanthaGalli

Cranston, RI



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