Falling

a submission for a six-word writing contest

Stumbling over pieces of broken dreams.

Reviews

[Chirag Kumar]

Its very painful to watch those dreams get shattered and then get over it.

[Jocie de Jaune]

Simple yet deep. Stumbling suggests your struggle, love it! Pieces shows how your dreams are divided and apart and broken suggests a dramatic experience, something that was one 'good' but is now 'bad', brilliant and dramatic combination of words and I totally agree with Hibah's comment!!!!

[Sarusai Hiryu]

Reads like poetry ... very nice!