The Summary

The secret Bulwark's meet the 5 element girls

When the planet Shevia was created its core was not lava, it was a magical substance capable of anything. Everyone that lived on Shevia thought it was a myth, but some people believed it and wanted to steal it. So planet Shevia created 5 female magical warriors who each had an element, they were Spirit, Fire, Water, Air and Shevia (in your world, its Earth). Around the age 12 they each start growing their powers in till they find and accept themselves in order for them to be used so meanwhile another secret warrior team called The Secret Bulwark's, they are 5 men who did not have magical powers but amazing fighting skills, but one day the young men and women have to team up when the Master of the Bulwark's claims a person who held great power was planning to steal the planet's core. The mission would not be easy. This secret team will experience strange first love, tears, anger, and full of suprises. Will they succeed? Will someone's secret be found and will the leader fall in a irresistable love?

Author's Note

Since the description had to be really short I included this so you'd know what was really going on! Hope you find the summary interesting! 😃

Reviews

[Daniel-Andre]

Nice, as I said before on the reviews I made of your chapters. I made it clear I liked the plot, and now I get an overview of what the entire plot is actually about. I must say, creative and interesting. Which is enough to get me on board. I feel like if a novel doesn`t have any of that, it`s rather dull. Yup, seeing the process and development of this novel will be interesting.

Only advice I can come up with as it comes to this overview of yours. Is if you plan to use this as an intro on the cover of the final version, then you`ve got to do some rewrites. That`s all. Period.

Needless to say, you`ve got my blessings, Samantha, author, and soldier of literature. When you release your chapters in the future, and your heroes and heroines attempts to fight the unthinkable, know that I will be watching.

[Samantha Anabella]

Ha ha, thanks for the review and have a great day!

[barleygirl]

This sentence is WAY TOO LONG & it contains two distinct areas of info, so maybe divide it up between the girls & the guys . . .

"Around the age 12 they each start growing their powers in till they find and accept themselves in order for them to be used so meanwhile another secret warrior team called The Secret Bulwark's, they are 5 men who did not have magical powers but amazing fighting skills, but one day the young men and women have to team up when the Master of the Bulwark's claims a person who held great power was planning to steal the planet's core."

Other than that, the idea for your book sounds interesting & imaginative & easy to follow for someone like myself who does not regularly read fantasy or adventure type books . . . (((HUGS)))

[Samantha Anabella]

Thanks for the review! Silly me, I didn't even notice! Ha! I'll get right to it when I can. Have a great day.

[Brittanie Bardwell]

I like that you created a summary to explain things about your book. With the magic, adventure, and romance, it really does seem like it will be a great book. I'm interested in the plot as well. The only thing I would recommend fixing on the summary is that it is a little chopping with the sentences. For example, you wrote "The Secret Bulwark's, they are 5 men who did not have magical powers but amazing fighting skills." If you leave this as is, it's not a complete sentence. Maybe combine it with the next sentence like "The Secret Bulwark's are 5 men who did not have magical powers and have to team up with the warrior women when the Master of the Bulwark's claims a person who held great power was planning to steal the planet's core." or something similar.

I also have a lot of characters in my novel so I know it's a lot of work to keep up with them all. I would suggest having a main female and male and work with them and have the remaining ones be important but side characters. That would allow you access to develop each one without making the reader terrible confused on who is doing what.

Although, you might pull if off without a problem! :)

Otherwise, I'm excited to read the book as you write and it see what happens!

[Samantha Anabella]

Thank you so much for the review! Especially pointing out that silly sentence, ha! I will fix that right away, I hope you have a pleasant day.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Interesting, though I don't go for magic. But I did like how you explained their power as coming from their planets core, starting with the beginning of them. The story line is pretty sharp too.

[Samantha Anabella]

Thank you so much for the review! I understand not being a fun of the magic part, because I have plenty of friends who are like that! Have a good afternoon!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're welcome! Thank you, you too!

[S. von Glaubitz]

Thanks for including a summary. When are the first chapters going to post?

Magic, danger, romance! Sounds like a fun story with a potential for a fun ensamble cast, which I for one would enjoy reading about.

I do have a few questions, which I'm sure reading the actual story would answer, but I'm going to ask anyway. Who exactly created these ten warriors? How long have they been around? Are the female warriors done growing their powers? How does one steal the core of a planet? It seems like a laughable goal for a villain to have. I guess you mean tap into it, make use of it? Is the Master of the Bulwarks one of the warriors or someone else?

I also foresee some potential for tricky writing with a team of ten. That's a lot of characters to handle all at once.

But I haven't read the story yet, so you might handle it just fine! You might have easy answers to all my questions worked out already! I see in your profile that you're a new writer, so I look forward to seeing what you're capable of and will try to give you what advice I can as you continue to write!

[Samantha Anabella]

Thank you so much for the review! Um, some of the questions are I think I should probably include in the summary, so thanks! Well, Planet Shevia created the ten warriors, Shevia is supposed to be a very magical planet but people aren't aware of it. The Planet magically gave certain characters certain abilities because of their personality, and those characters have been reborn into generation after generation to protect the planet. The Female warriors start growing the powers around the age of 12 and there not ready to protect Shevia in till they've found and accepted them selves. (Since you gave me a review first I'll give you a little secret) One of the characters gets bullied for not having found their powers, but starts falling in love with another character who heals the character and finds their power. But they continue to grow their powers. When all 5 elements are together they are able to form a vortex and go into the core of the planet. The Master of the Bulwarks is not specifically a warrior but he has the ability to sense when someone is going to approach the the core. He can basically predict the future and he raised the young men when they were little boys to be warriors.

All ten characters are not going to be focused on, while yes they will be mentioned a few times in the book there are main characters that will be mostly focused on.

I want to thank you again for making me think that I should probably put more details on the summary, it means a lot!