my own hell

Once a smile, now a frown. 
Once a city, now burned down. 
Excite yourself, have a visit,
Paradise awaits you, it’s quite unfit. 

Lies, hate and treasures untold. 
Wait, you haven’t begun to see it unfold. 
The magic, the glory, the hammering sound,
All being heard from under this ground. 

Silence and mockery at the final gate,
Once you enter, your soul disintegrates. 
Trapped forever, unlike any other dimension,
You’re gone, it’s not just a suspension.

The world you once knew, 
Will finally wish you adieu.
You can now be in peace, and wish your lucky seven;
Here in my hell demented version of heaven.

Reviews

[Sarah]

wow this is awesome but twisted in many ways.... but this is a good write good work!