tick tick tock tock

tick tick tock tock

A Poem by LetiStoned

Tick tock,Tick tock!

What's up?!

What's taking you so long?!

I'm waiting for you

here....idk if i can wait any

longer- - - -

You had your time!!

I'm no longer your's!!!

Don't cry!!

Don't even try!!

Now I have a new guy!!

AHA!!

I WIN!! :P

© 2009 LetiStoned


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very nice, short and sweet with an awesome message to it

Posted 13 Years Ago


ok thats is cute like it mucho

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a very cute poem.


Posted 15 Years Ago


This was good.
But you can't use "idk" in a poem.
But i love it!
Keep writing.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 18, 2009

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LetiStoned
LetiStoned

Linden, NJ



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