Time?

Time

Why so fast?

why doesn't it last?

When time passes 

i feel the ashes 

from my hour glasses.

How can i make time stand still?

While i look through my windowsill,

Why does time stand soo still?

Reviews

Simple, but to the point. Time slows down when we want it to go fast, and then it passes by when we just want it to stay still.

[Last Lying Look]

This is really good.
It's short but the content is excellent.
"Why so fast?
why doesn't it last?
When time passes
i feel the ashes
from my hour glasses":
Great work!
-Elissa :)

[...MysteryGirl...]

i love it

[StoryTailor]

A few typos (but everyone has them. so it's no big deal) but overall it's great. I loved it.