Free Bird

Vancouver !

I want my voice to echoe across this Earth
So I'll be rememberd forever

I will soon spread my wings
To reach my heaven city

Open up the sky
While I plan my escape

I have awakend my mind
For my eyes to see beyond

The place I Love will be where I can
Taste the sea and breath through the sun

Who will be waiting upon the shore of my arrival ?

Reviews

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. and you get gold again ... for this beautifully inspirational song ... and these are epic lines ... sheer genius and sheer beauty ...

The place I Love will be where I can
Taste the sea and breath through the sun

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Oh....You have captured beauty..You have captured the essence of freedom...I love the last line...it's kind of like asking...oi..who's with me..

[Citizen Erased]

Wonderful poem. The place you love is waiting for your arrival! And I will be waiting upon the shore for your arrival. :P