I want You

I want You

A Poem by Trevor

I will hold onto this single flower forever

Waiting upon your return
You will kiss me alive

You can turn a dark and twisted night into a morning star

Your smile can make any star shine its brightest

© 2010 Trevor


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Trevor
It's not finished yet, can anyone help? or give suggestions ?

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Oh Trevor...I would leave it just as it is...not adding to it nor taking away from it...it is charming... only thing; "Your smile can make any star shine it's brightest" - the 'it's' should be 'its' - without the apostrophe :) Otherwise...anyone would be touched to have this written for them ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh my, this is marvelous so far! It's sweet I like it! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. oh, how endearing and enchanting ... and so amazingly melodious ... beautifully written, trevor ... very magical ... :) ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh god, that's a really nice poem!!!!
It's sweet!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 18, 2010
Last Updated on September 19, 2010

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Trevor
Trevor

terrace, Canada



About
It takes little to inspire me. When something beautiful captures my eye I simply enjoy the moment, because it's too important to try and capture more..

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OH! My Love OH! My Love

A Poem by Trevor