Enter Into The Dark and Awaken

Enter Into The Dark and Awaken

A Poem by Trevor

I look at every light with a different thought

I know every light knows something different about me

When I dream I am in my full form

I can command the shape of the galaxie from the beach of my birth

Swim with clouds and laugh until it rains !

But when I am awake my hand can only express my mind

Awaken my river of thoughts and dreams

 

And create life, kill an idea with a stroke of my sword on paper

Will you join me and open your eyes?

© 2010 Trevor


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yes, let's join and open each other's eyes, then the eyes of others!! Well done and very expressive.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


Fantastic poem. I like lines 5 to 8. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. but of course ... you are a star that basks in the day as much as in the night ... you are a star and your thoughts are always right ... you traverse the universe with unique words and imagery ... oh, it's a spell in an enchanting reverie ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Trevor
Trevor

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