Black to White and Back To Rainbows Again

Black to White and Back To Rainbows Again

A Poem by Trevor

When the light shines I am at my most darkest

Being behind this trapped door is only a fantasy

If it were real I'd be dead

My mind goes in circles

Grey thoughts turning black

I am fading away in the deepest hole

Please help me scream my name

That will stretch and tear mountain tops

I then realize crawling out of this hole

That the light at the end of this tunnel

Is not a place or thing

But my matched soul

© 2010 Trevor


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Trevor
This was very hard to write

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As i told you before,
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. i'm not sure i know how to say this precisely ... but i'll try ... you are amazingly exceptionally gifted in a spiritual sense ... meaning that you transcribe the progression of thought very well ... and you are extremely skillful in the language ... meaning that you pick words brilliantly ... i'm still very new to your writing ... still in the phase where i get amazed by your uniqueness ... i wouldn't be able to tell which write of yours i liked more ... but keep writing ... you rock! ...

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Trevor
Trevor

terrace, Canada



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It takes little to inspire me. When something beautiful captures my eye I simply enjoy the moment, because it's too important to try and capture more..

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