Star Gazing

I can remember that time and place perfectly

That beautiful smell of the scene

Your smile perfecting my day
And eyes that can heal wounds

Matched with my soul
Beyond comparison

Please return now, my star is fading

I've got to get out of this hole

Reviews

[Ashinna]

It's Beautiful. I love it! :)

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. that's the most endearing poetic plea i've read in a long, long time ... and it lingers ... like a song ... you're so innovative with the language ... and yet so classic in your appeal ... i wish you a million sparkling stars ... and the love of a million galaxies ... just for these uniquely beautiful words ...