Addicted To Air

Every single second a miracle

From every thunderbolt to every smile

And we are not simply grains of sand

But each mind a new universe

Every friend a treasure

Larger than any planet

Every free bird a new angel

Don't give up

Reviews

[scatterbrain]

I don't agree with the sentiments of the poem (i'm very harsh on society), but this is wonderful! not a mind-blower, but a definite step up from the last poem. some great lines, and i won't suggest that you do anything. whatever you're doing to write is working, cause this is a very good poem :)

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. trevor, you're a magician ... no further evidence is needed ... you're a word wizard with the sun's palette at your beck and call ... these words would light up all planets ... and make stars twinkle some more ...