Angel

This is one of my first poems ever.

The angels last word has not conqured all
What's done is done
On a long distant highway will
Lie the truth of one being
This is not the journey mans last walk
His past lies beyond the horizon star

My mind is not set on this Earth
It is simply beyond what you seek
Nothing can bring me back once I begin
What is your desire beyond life?

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

Punctuation will make this more readable. Don't freak, my first poem was 192 lines with no punctuation. I learned because someone gave me an honest critique.

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. to finally get to my thousand piece jigsaw that actually has 1200 pieces ... 200 to make the degree of difficulty 'impossible' ... they're so deceptive ... but then that's me ... i have no doubt in my mind that you'll find a million more poetic planets ... even if you don't look ... and here ... in ... "nothing can bring me back once i begin" ... is utter genius ...