Questioning Questions of Question!

Questioning Questions of Question!

A Poem by salttydawg
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This really has no meaning; I just want reviews and comments on what people think. Thanks!

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Have you ever hated?

Well, than you have loved.

 

Have you ever cried?

Well, than you have laughed.

 

Have you ever been in pain?

Well, than you've felt joy.

 

Can you totally feel anything bad, without having or than feeling somthing to the inverse?

 

© 2012 salttydawg


Author's Note

salttydawg
This was me just being weird....... Please don't be too harsh.

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sure I have!

I think you should expand more on this, I felt like there should have been an answer after the last line.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think this is amazing, such truth in your words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I just read your profile and you say that you are not a good writer... So far so good. I've read two poems not so far and I am liking what I am seeing.

correct: without having or than feeling somthing to the inverse (on the last line and your will be good to go)

And yes I have not felt one of those feelings without the other... great observation... good write.. keep it up

Posted 12 Years Ago


So very true! Wise words :) Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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salttydawg
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Three Rivers, MI



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Hi, my name is Tylar Salter. I am deffinitly not a good writer, but I do try my hardest! My main purpose for writing is to better understand myself. With this new found understanding, I can fully expr.. more..

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