In the office

This is a six word only poem

 Fingers slowing, Pile growing, Desk overflowing

 

 

Sally Edwards 25/03/2008

Reviews

[Ankhesen Mié]

Oh, honey...I hear that! Part of my job is to glare at a company for nineteen hours a day (okay, maybe just eighteen). Either way--funny!

[alyssa]

THat very good for you in a good way

[Judith Gayle Nail]

:^)... been there! Good on you!

[Hugh James]

Great poem. I work in an office, so I can definitely relate to "fingers slowing," "pile growing," and "desk overflowing." Grr.

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Great work with such few words! I loved that you expressed so much!

[Rain]

The image you gave in those few lines captured the cubicle chaos. A really good job. Rain..

[Phil Sanders]

Brilliant !!!!!

[Kris Tate]

Very interesting, I like it and I am not normally one to like minimalist poems, but this one conveys all the frustration of an entire generation stuck in the cubicles that run our lives.

[Wolfwind Words]

Oh god! The curse of the Cubicle worker! I've been there for 5 long years i sat behind one, and i know how the song goes.
Six words and you have captured the full image!
Great Write! :)

[J.P. Bristow]

someone give this girl a prize........short ..........impactful.....yet another case of the power of the basics!!!!