Life with arthritis

A six word poem

Cures my  ills...........the arthritis pills

 

 

Sally Edwards

23/03/2008

Reviews

[Shadows of Sight]

Naturopathy! pills are just a way for the pharmicudical companies to get rich!
The pain suck, i know. But we as a race need to get away from popping pills everytime something is wrong with us. It makes us poorer, and a small select few billions!
Oh my! Did i say that! (blush...) Sorry, just my opinion :)

[Dalaina Renee]

That is hard! I have it at the age of 32. Shouldn't have skiied and broken bones! Now I know when ever it rains! My arm will hurt when it does!

[Mary Katherine]

short and to the point! i like how some of your poems are full of imgery and others are very simple, but charming!

[Dani California]

Very clever :)

[Judith Gayle Nail]

"wish it were true.......I'd come and join you"!! LOL (revealing)

[Belinda Rice]

wow short but good i hope to see more of your writing soon

[Lucinda Bogart]

LOL !! Right to the point. Refreshing and funny.

[Valentine]

Short but true and also clever..one thing I have learned in my life...the longer you live..the more pills it takes to just keep you alive and going..God bless...valentine

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This was good! I loved that it only had six words. The structure was perfect for this piece. I loved it!

[Wolfwind Words]

The image of someone holding up a huge pill, and a glass of water, knowing that it will take the pain away, but the imense size of the filled tube of anti-pain solution, is just a bit more then they can take at the time.
Great Write about something so painful!
:)
Better the pill, then knawing the ailing part of you off! lol

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Repeat every six hours as needed! Great write! :)