I started to think about when two people fall in love, who perhaps shouldn't...........but we can't always help who we fall in love with. This is based on an old flame from years ago only the outcome was different to my poem. I'm a hopeless romantic, so..
You fill up my mind with enticing thoughts Around and around in my head is all sorts Such wonderful erotic, sensual images The tension has been building for ages When at last they get their release Will the turmoil finally cease?
You smile that smile, and I can't say no I falter and know I should really go Instead into your arms I flow We kiss lustfully making me glow Together we sigh and with haste undress Together we writhe our shyness less
We move together with such animal lust Until my fears are abated and dust What was so wrong at the start Now seems right in my heart Forever and ever we have to be For now you are my world you see
I'm confused on this one.... Does this assume that Sexual Lust is the same thing as Love? or have do we assume, that these two have already gone through the mental processes of love, and are just getting to the physical? or is this a heated random moment of passion, like on a one night stand?
It's writen very well, and your images are vivid as always.
I just felt that it was about lust, not love. :) Just my opinion. :)
Wow this is really great! The images you created were perfect! I loved the idea that this was about two people falling in love instead of out of love. It was good.
Hi I'm single and new to poetry, am just browsing other poetry at the moment before plucking courage to upload my own. I am a hopeless romantic, cry at the silliest moments. I work in an office and my.. more..