The Kiss

wishful thinking

Your strong arms embrace me

In your eyes there's passion I see

You hold me so close and so tight

I wish I could stay like this all night

Your gentle lips brush against mine

I savour the touch like a glasss of wine

I feel heady and drunk as you now waken

passion that was still and is now shaken

Your kisses deepen and stir me even more

my senses heightened to the very core

I kiss you back with passion and fever

Wanting to kiss forever and ever

 

Sally Edwards

14-03-2008

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Very romantic and deeply passionate! Great write!

[Phil Sanders]

This is a delightful sensual poem ... beautifully written from the heart.....

[Belinda Rice]

well written sally i really like this this is something i can say about my husband cause we did get married and the passion in this is sooooooooo wonderful i can feel in in my soul when i read it...

[jenbem]

patrachian sonnet?
well written! My only suggestion would be to add some punctuation, the line breaks do a good job of showing where an idea ends, but periods and commas would make it a much easier read. I really enjoyed it and I hope your wishful thinking turns into a dream come true!!

jenbem