In the heat of the moment

A brief 6 word poem

Eyes lusting, bodies thrusting, passion spent

Author's Note

I have changed the image that goes with this poem..... thank you Aaron this is more relevant

Reviews

[Michael X]

i just read this, and your words left me breathless for a second, i loved the passion you so sensually bring out in just a few words and to me that is a gift of being able to capture the essence of the meaning,
you are the only writer i have met that uses the six word form, and its captivating, as well as inspiring,
pure expression of passion, in full spectrum, lusting, thrusting, spent, a romatically descriptive gem, mike

[None]

Six words but such a robust picture created with them here! Well written.

[Erin]

I like that you have a very defined style that is clearly yours. Even in six words, you're able to convey picturesque images, emotions, actions, AND still do so in your own personal writing tone and voice. Great job!

[SweetPeachesAlways]

I love it!

[Wolfwind Words]

I liked this! With the tweety bird picture, it turned the images from the poem into an avian scene. Of a hawk high in the sky spotting it's prey, then diving down fast and hard catching it up, crushing it with it's talons, then finding a quiet perch to take rest, and enjoy it's well earned meal.
Amazing how such few words coupled with a picture can change the meaning huh?
Love it!

[Alexander W. Quinn]

I like this style. You give an emotional and well balanced poetic essence in just a few words. I think you have to be more clever to pull this off in only six words than if you can use as many as you please. Nice work!

[Phil Sanders]

Delicious writing ... beautifully done ....very sensual ....