Betrayed

A Poem by Sally Edwards

She is betrayed

That special smile

Those tender words

are no longer hers

Now she knows

He has strayed

It is done

Her heart hurts

Tears well up

She cannot feel

She cannot speak

She feels empty

He has gone

She is alone

Block it out

Put up the wall

Shut love out

She is betrayed

Sally Edwards

04/02/08

© 2008 Sally Edwards

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Wolfwind Words

A Wonderful twining of both imagery and boldness strokes of simple words, with the absolute sorrow and sadness that comes with a man who strays from the path of loyalty. An awsome powerful work that i know i can relate to personally. Thanks for sharing

Posted 16 Years Ago

4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

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Wolfwind Words

Posted 16 Years Ago

4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Erin

This poem conveys amazing imagery without being wordy. The message is clear and powerful, but also concise and direct. Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago

3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 13, 2008
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Author

Sally Edwards

United Kingdom

About

Hi I'm single and new to poetry, am just browsing other poetry at the moment before plucking courage to upload my own. I am a hopeless romantic, cry at the silliest moments. I work in an office and my.. more..