the lady , brain

i have written this poem about our brain but personified as as a woman

This lady, brain' job is  to always look gorgeous

afterall she is the brand embassador of my existence 

But

This brain jams when given ample rest

Oh god, she grows a nasty flab

o:p>

The brain needs workout

To maintain the curves and attract the crowd

 

Once she stops gymming

She eats all crap

Containing high Trans fat

 

People then call her a fool

demotivating her to the extent 

that thenshe pouts  and over dresses unnecessarily

People taking it as a gaudy accessory

and mock her for her fashion sense 

 

 

 

So better be a strict boss and command  the brain to  workout regularly

And let her retain her glamour 

So the world may clamor

For her beauty and

Then she will always be on her duty

Wisely.

. And your brand will become a succesful tycoon

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

honest comments please :)

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

my honest comment is that i love the personification...and also the idea that the brain is beautiful...and women can be most sexy because of their brains moreso than physical looks...

there is definitely a poem here now. i am looking forward now to the newest Disney animated movie..."Brain and the Beast"---

[sakshi arora]

thank u sir :)

[Zahra]

cool write, interesting. Nicely penned

[AYVID N]

Indeed, the brain needs regular workouts too. In fact, more so, keeping in tandem with today's competitive world where the rules of the game change in minutes. So what choices does a woman have? More so, when being clever is also about being cool and...SEXY!!!

A great comment from you in very nicely packaged poetry, my compliments, Sakshi!

[sakshi arora]

thanks for the appreciation :)

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome. It's a pleasure to get acquainted with your writing.

[zainul]

Very wise and clever efforts to talk about the brain.
Yes you have nicely pointed out the functions of the human brain and shared precious suggestions for maintaining the brain for proper performance.
It is a special work which shows how a poet can inspire people about good practices.
Thank you Sakshi for the lovely work.

[sakshi arora]

thanks a lot sir

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear friend.

[Anand Sehgal]

But

This brain jams when given ample rest

Oh god, it grows a nasty flab

She is not blessed and has a poor metabolism

The brain needs workout

I loved those truth expressed in the form of poetry :)

Keep up the good work dear :)
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[sakshi arora]

thanks a lot sir

[Anand Sehgal]

you are welcome dear :) pen on :)

[Sami Khalil]

"let her retain her glamour
So the world may clamor
For her beauty and
Then she will always be on her duty"

A beautiful and smart woman for some men is doubly splendid. A wonderful write...:)..................

[sakshi arora]

thank u for ur gracious words

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. :)...................

[A. Amos]

Sharp and smart write and was enjoyable read!

[sakshi arora]

thank u so much

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Abdul Aziz]

Personification as a tool can be used for highly effective purposes. I liked the overall humorous tone of the poem, and the suggestion for all of us to use our brains. But as a doctor, I just can't get over the "poor metabolism" part. The brain has one of the highest rates of metabolism in the body. But let me stop being pedantic, and see this poem for what it is - a playful comment on the value of exercising our brains regularly :)

[sakshi arora]

thank you sir :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there is no poem here....

[sakshi arora]

oops yeah i l repost ;