Parking-lot Picnic

Two pieces of bread, sea gulls!

The murder cries defiance

I toss them more soul, sight dims.

A sign says to my world

"Free coffee Fridays"

Thank souls for food; rain drops

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

This is an interesting little poem you've written here. It really describes how annoying seagulls can be(especially when they just fly up and snatch your food). I really enjoy reading poems such as this one a lot! Good job! :)

[sakiasen]

To many of them and never enough of me. For now