R.I.P

 

 

 

So....The smoke cleared and I....

I was left standing rock solid and bound by earth

 

Breathless from dodging blows

Even though few landed

Roaming amongst the lost, that which is my curse

 

(shudder/Quiver/Shiver)

 

"May i steal your sanity for a second?"

 

For a look in our eyes (yes our eyes)

is to follow the path of the devils footprints

 

Sprawled back to where love in the city of us was a word of revolution

Spray painted on abandoned walls of the mind and heart

 

In a sense we breach the 6th sense, To leave you again

footprints

 

Footprints against the crowd

like jagged rocks to break your fall

 

Yet our Apathy stays timeless like time in it of itself

Time which mocks the mockers who busy themselves with

Self-Indulgence

 

Breaking off the barriers of these old shelves

So that in humor, styles fade like leaves in Autumn

 

This group of us will stay happy digging at rock bottom

The paradox of unorthodox are we

 

Because few will match the agenda

Stamped to ellapse, our blood soaked letter to love

 

R.I.P to the Lies

 

 

 

 

 

-The Realest-

 

 

Author's Note

Enjoy

Reviews

[O!]

I needed to read this. I love how u look at stuff and write about it, very unique and unusual in a good way!...u definitely are intelligent and are understanding of what 'lies' beneath.

x,
O!

[Who among Fire]

Definitely not hard to read. It flows and ebbs just as it should... I rather like it.

[Hedra Helix]

nice man, im delirious after a night of writing but this still swung me along, trust me thats a feat in itself, did i mention im delirious? yeah, ill come back and read it later today, give ya the read you deserve but from my tilting world i still spotted some strong gems in there and thats friggin cool

thanks for hittn me up.

Hey spoken word poet huh? ya know you can post youtubes on here, my newest one ahhh whats it called, delirious....ummm..s**t am i going to have to go look, no, "i dont think im skinny i said to god" or something like that... has a you tube reading, if you want to know how to put one up let me know.

[Rambling Prose]

I don't think this was difficult to read at all. I quite understood the underlying thoughts & my mind's eye easily followed lies to its rightful burying place. I beheld quite a battle on the journey to the grave though. The only part I didn't understand is: "in the city of us"...

~good job~

[Beka]

Honestly.
I found it kind of difficult to read.
I do like how you strike with your words though.
Captivating.
But it is a bit of a rough ride.
I do enjoy it though.

[theladyjai]

u must be going thru sum thangs or was. interesting.