Scream

free write on an insominac night

See internally I scream, its the same place my soul bleeds words written by angel feathers that where singed by demon flames

 

yes I scream

 

Though internally I fear it may show on my face, the food I taste, the way I try and pick up lifes pace ,to maybe erase the place where I internally scream

 

When did Zeus or be it Eros feeling more like Anubiss decide to bless/curse these mortal eyes? to realize the vibrant colors of life have faded from azure blues, scarlet and crimson to the thin grey line

 

I seek understandment cuz my thoughts run deep through vortexeses of cerbeal cortexes finding nibulus to nexus, till it exits on a computer screen

 

Is there nobody that still heres the call for adventure? taking drives to nowhere hearing the fabled winds call, realizing truth is in the moment not the past or the future.

 

I struggle finding myself supressing who I am for those I love, Its not that im trying to change but wake you the f**k up. Take a chance life is short but can be so sweet stop sweating the small s**t TRY IT TRY IT and try it again. Love and dont let yourself get in the way of that love till it hurts love till you cant possible overcome the joyous feeling pure ecstacy bliss just overall f*****g contempment and then when you reached that point love some more

 

I fear the problem being that nobody could possibly understand me because most of you dont understand yourselves

 

take the time to soul search

 

 

take the time to scream

Author's Note

free write so grammar and structure where not taken into condieration

Reviews

[emz]

another fabulous write... you have such a gift for words... i like the way you almost scream!!! "come on, live life"... wow i loved it

x

[KEENAMARiE]

'Is there nobody that still heres the call for adventure? taking drives to nowhere hearing the fabled winds call, realizing truth is in the moment not the past or the future."

- I know now that truth really is in the moment and i think this is why you inspire me constantly pointing out things that are usually right under your nose is something you do so simply.

[O!]

Very intelligent!! thats what first comes to my mind...the next..."intelligent, intelligent, intelligent"...

i enjoyed reading this very much. Ty for sharing it...

typo: heres (?!)

am keeping this.

x,
O!

Really good! I loved the first two lines, written by angel feathers! That is great! I like how I could relate to what you wrote! Great write!

[Pj]

This is really wonderful. It definately came from the heart and was raw and special. Thank you for giving me the right to scream lol...may sound weird but sometimes you need someone to make you feel and to remind you!
Nice job mate

[Lorraine Pearson]

The biggest truth: "realizing truth is in the moment not the past or the future."

You've certainly screamed, and I believe you will continue to scream...you are a poet-- it is what you do my friend. Waking up the conciousness of those that are seemingly asleep...or too pre-occupied to really realize it is LIFE they hold in their hands. Keep on screaming! :)
~Lorraiyne

[Pointblank]

I so believe this..so hard for some. I liked the line "My soul bleeds words written by angel feathers singed by demon flames" I think most of us who write can honestly relate and try to convey this.....I haven't seen it said better. Very well done.

[Y. Counts]

This is great....challenges the reader to come clean with their own ignorance and get busy with TRUTH. I relate with your line, "I struggle finding myself repressing myself for those I love," because we seem stuck in the patterns we have made, seeing each other in one dimension when we are really so much more than that.
When I think of what is comfortable for me I want to scream too, give rise to a little personal anarchy, "wake the f**k up," as you say. I believe that this must be the real purpose of things. Great write!

[Mortricia]

"Love and dont let yourself get in the way of that love"...I love this line. It's so true. We're our own worst enemies. Lovely poem..

[Brette Medb]

The flow and the imagery were great, I really liked how it was long, it allowed me to keep the mental image going. The shift in descriptions was barely perceptible a sign of a great write,

Nice work.


Brette