i dont know i guess ill title it when finished

this is actually song lyrics and i just need some opinions

All i wanna do 

is be beside you 

All i need to say 

is that i need you 

And every single day 

You take my breath away 

You make me wanna fall 

Out of my darkest place 

So why must i follow 

You down this path 

Why should i listen 

When your fallin' fast 

DO you even realize 

This is your past 

That the right is the wrong 

And the end dose not last 

Author's Note

this will be updated as i get insperation right know im stuck though