Like it flows….

Like it flows….

A Poem by Introspective Mind

Burn like the Sun, shine like the Moon

Soar like hopes, dive like a loon

Dance like ripples, sing like pain

Smile like the stars, weep like rain

Hold hand like memories, untie like a tale

Embrace like a creeper, kiss like a veil

Reveal like the dawn, fade like the dusk

Treasure like values, share like musk

Teach like the nature, learn like the mind

Paint like the seasons, wipe like the wind

Grow like a pearl, recede like ebb

Sail like a drifter, lie like grave

Walk like the wishes, run like a stream

Live like a candle, die like a dream

© 2012 Introspective Mind


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And grasp the moment with all you have, the essence of faith and hope comes from simply allowing the self to "just be" and this exhales that vision perfectly, a most beautiful flow to this piece too, much enjoyed! xox

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well done, I think that this would sound great with music, perhaps percussion, good pace and content

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Introspective Mind

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Poppy, for your wonderful review...take care
SHEEMA HUQ

11 Years Ago

I think that Poppy would like her precious reply back from you, my friend, he he, you make me smile.. read more
Introspective Mind

11 Years Ago

@ Sheema....hmm....could be fine if it finds tune too....nice smile...

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Added on December 17, 2012
Last Updated on December 17, 2012
Tags: life, poetry, poem, thought, philosophy

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Introspective Mind
Introspective Mind

Kolkata (Calcutta), India



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I am here just to express some moments of my life--either experienced or dreamt of or maybe, hoped for .............. more..

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