A MAHAL

A MAHAL

A Poem by SAGAR
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THE TAJ MAHAL

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A MAHAL…

Christened as beauteous wonder of the modern world
An epitaph itself..truly a poem without any word
A chaste gleaming mausoleum..shade of purity
Like a jeweled empress..a blissful reality…

Engraved in a precious polished stone
Shining star on mother earth..chaste gemstone
A Kohinoor glitz..such hypnotizing splendor
Cherished site to revisit..India’s glory and honor

An architecture which enunciates prowess of true love
A Castle of dreams that stands tall and cohesive
The four minarets abode each corner..act as guardian
As it glistens like a diamond in the moonlight elysian…THE TAJ MAHAL

© 2014 SAGAR


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The four minarets abode each corner..act as guardian
As it glistens like a diamond in the moonlight elysian…THE TAJ MAHAL
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The four minarets abode each corner..act as guardian(s)
As it glistens like a diamond in the moonlight elysian…THE TAJ MAHAL
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I wonder if you wanted to add the (s) in there...
the scene...and the way you represent the monument...
quite expressively --- in this verse...


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SAGAR

10 Years Ago

Yes, you are right friend, thanks for the view... surely take care of this .
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

you're welcome...



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The four minarets abode each corner..act as guardian
As it glistens like a diamond in the moonlight elysian…THE TAJ MAHAL
----
The four minarets abode each corner..act as guardian(s)
As it glistens like a diamond in the moonlight elysian…THE TAJ MAHAL
---
I wonder if you wanted to add the (s) in there...
the scene...and the way you represent the monument...
quite expressively --- in this verse...


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SAGAR

10 Years Ago

Yes, you are right friend, thanks for the view... surely take care of this .
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

you're welcome...

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Added on March 22, 2014
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SAGAR
SAGAR

Amritsar, Punjab, India



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