he, my music

he, my music

A Poem by sageflames

you are the record

placed onto the turntable

the soft, crisp cackle

above the silence

before the music

you are the perfect placement

the needle that begins every song-

ends every last word

you are the sound waves

forming a dancer out of me

you are the flipping of the disc

and the perfect placement

of the beginning

of the end

© 2017 sageflames


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This is wonderful. I read it and then read it again straight away as there was stuff I wanted to let sink in a second time.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sageflames

7 Years Ago

Thank you I did the same as well!
Everyone get own understanding of poems. I can see this like adoration person who loves you and love music. Very beautiful sonnet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sageflames

7 Years Ago

Thank you I appreciate the feedback
Wayfaring stranger

7 Years Ago

You welcome I like it.

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About
I am not too fond of titles, being put into a box. I am an artist and the art. That is all. more..

Writing
not sorry not sorry

A Poem by sageflames