pass it on

counting ripples in a pond
a hummingbird buzzed beside me at a lily flowing gently in the wind
it looked up and passed me a smile
and a whisper saying simply ..
pass it on :)

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

"counting ripples in a pond
a hummingbird buzzed beside me at a lily flowing gently in the wind
it looked up and passed me a smile
and a whisper saying simply ..
pass it on :) "

~*~
*Poetry in Response*
~ written in response to "Pass It On" by Matthew L. Arcelay
~*~

Sitting on the bank of a river
An eagle soars high above.
It is so serene here, a far cry from
the city where people push and shove.

Crickets sing their lullabies of harmony,
Keeping in rhythm to coyote songs.
Leave me to enjoy this beautiful place,
For it's truly where my heart belongs.

[lauren emily]

Pass on the happiness! haha. I like this..it put me in a good mood.
Keep up the good work,
~Lauren

[Wicahpi]

"counting ripples in a pond
a hummingbird buzzed beside me at a lily flowing gently in the wind
it looked up and passed me a smile
and a whisper saying simply ..
pass it on :) " ~ beautifully written