The October SKY

The October Sky,The birds that fly....

Mixing up of Vibrant colors on this very canvas of sky...

I wish I  was a BIRD and could fly....

Searching for my future in this TORNED sky.....

The OCTOBER Sky

The October Sky ,the clouds up and high ....

Enchanting a new life to the roots which were until lying Dry

I wish I was a SEED uprooting tall and high.....

leveling my head up ,A smile and eyes Dry....

The OCTOBER Sky 

Reviews

[Liza]

an inspiration of flight - dreams of soaring - of admiration of the unlimited possibilites we perceive birds have...for they always can pick up and go; search and find on their own...at least that is what we long for...freedom to fly ~ a recognition of proverbial clipped wings

[katyj]

I enjoyed this write and the flow.
Awesome rhyme scheme as well.