Purple

Purple

A Poem by hiempsal
"

Love, written in purple ink.

"
Making sense was too easy because
we loved a challenge,
and complication was exactly that.
Because we loved drama. Tragedy. 

Each other.

Because by the blue lights of winter
your arms looked like home
and the tragedy fell away beneath 
the wind.

Everything was complicated
just how we liked it
and I made silent vows to explain
to myself on paper in your purple ink.

Turns out I couldn't find the words
because you are my words
and you make no sense; only more questions and dreams.

Instead, I'll make do with poetic nonsense,
still written in purple because
it reminds me of you.

© 2011 hiempsal


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I really liked this poem. Its simplicity and its message was clear cut, consise, and straight foward. It also has great symbolism... I enjoyed the romantic conotation too esspecially the following lines: "Turns out I couldn't find the words
because you are my words
and you make no sense; only more questions and dreams."
Thank you very much for sharing this special poem. I have also added you to my friends list...

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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"Turns out I couldn't find the words because you are my words and you make no sense"...pure brilliance! Every line is perfectly sculpted but those are outstanding. An amazing write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think it's more than simple as a matter of fact I think its quite complicated.
It could be loss but I think it goes much deeper the eye lets on...

Anyway thanks for sharing I loved it.

Kelley

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this one. I really like the fourth stanza, "Turns out I couldn't find the words/because you are my words/and you make no sense..." i feel like I've been there before. Very nice write. Might I add, if purple is supposed to be an awkward offset of red, which is how I read it, I think that is brilliant!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this poem. Its simplicity and its message was clear cut, consise, and straight foward. It also has great symbolism... I enjoyed the romantic conotation too esspecially the following lines: "Turns out I couldn't find the words
because you are my words
and you make no sense; only more questions and dreams."
Thank you very much for sharing this special poem. I have also added you to my friends list...

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 11, 2011
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Tags: purple ink nonsense poetic

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hiempsal
hiempsal

London, England, United Kingdom



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So, I'm an 18-year-old poet from London. I write about anything and everything, because I can, and I love it. Hopefully you'll love it too. more..

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