Typical Heartbreaker (Co-Written by Amy Colalella)

Amy turned a few parts of my original poem "Who You Are to Me" into a song and added some of her words. Tell me what you think. (: Enjoy.

 

and I hate the way you look at me
through your stupid green eyes
and you're feeling that you're feeling me
but that's really no surprise
you look me up and down,
you always got around
you never thought I'd be the one
now I walk away,
nothing left to say.
Never thought I'd be done

I guess youre just like any other guy
unable to realize how much I cry
I'll see you in the future, sooner or later
Here is my final goodbye to a typical heartbreaker

You made me feel alive,
our hands intertwined
and our hearts were in tune.
You told me I shown brighter than the stars and the moon
My minds away from you,
nothing more to do.
Situations gotten old.
Took all I could take,
no more time to waste.
It's your heart that's getting told

I guess you're just like any other guy
Unable to realize how much I cry
I'll see you in the future, sooner or later
Here is my final goodbye to a typical heartbreaker

You're the one with the perfect touch
Filled with love and joy and such
A little clueless, but what can I do?
I wish you knew how much I still love you

I guess youre just like any other guy
unable to realize how much I cry
I'll see you in the future, sooner or later
Heres i my final goodbye to a typical heartbreaker
(repeat)

 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think? Be honest (:

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

YOUR CHORUS IS GOOD AND THE STORY LINE IS FAIR IN THIS ONE...SEEMS A BIT DEPRESSING BUT I GUESS BREAK-UPS ARE THAT WAY...HARD TO CONVEY THE WHOLE PIECE BECAUSE YOU DO NOT GET THE FULL ARRAY OF THE WRITE WITH THE MUSIC...