Little signs

No one would knowR it, no one would expect it but I know.

I seeA the small things, I see the many signs.

Our love is long overP, but our affection runs deeper than anyone can see

 

No one wouldT see it, no can understand.

But I see the subtle signsU of friendship he hands me.

I seeR it even if he doesn’t mean for me to see.

 

HeE doesn’t occupy my heart any longer,

 But the part of me that misses his companionship

Longs to grab hold of  those small signs he gives me

 And never let them go

CAME 

So although no one sees it, and even though the signs are so small

They are hardly noticeable

I see them

And I accept them with a heart open with gratitude

 

Thank you D

For the little signs

 

   

Reviews

[Jetta Zippora]

Lovely write, friend. Simple with much truth spelled out. :)

[Sarah Jane]

I am currently in a situation where the third stanza almost seem to be written for me. I even sent it to the boy it reminded me of. No worries I told him it was yours:) Its really a wonderful piece and the boy i sent it to also thinks its cute. Keep it up

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Beautiful :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Touching, simple but with full emotion for the reader to feel well done, good read.

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is sweet and sad.. almost as though your being strung along by some ungreatful person.. You are a person.. Don't let the past hold you down and don't be afraid to move foward.. Great write :)

[Poppie Mira]

Pure philosophical poem.
Really nice poem.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Oh my gosh, wonderfully done!!! i love this so much!

[STAR CHILD]

this is quite good thank you for sharing

[MandaBear]

great write and thank your for sharing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

When the love begin to died. Hard to stop. I like the way you expressed the signs of love fading away. No weakness in the outstanding poem.
Coyote