No matter

No matter

A Poem by sarah

No matter how hard I tried

No matter how manyS tears I cried

No matter how many times I apologized

Or triedU to make amends

 

You'll never look Cat me the same

We will never go back

To the wayK they once were

Nothing I do will make a difference

 

 No mCatter how hard I try

No matter how many timOes I call your name

No matter hCow sorry I am

In my heKart

 

 The only thingW you see

When you look at me

Is pain

 

 We caHn never go back

We will neverObe friends

You will never sRee me the same

You will never acceptE me

 

 And I’m done trying to go back in time

I'm done trying to get your forgiveness

I'm done trying to get you to look at me

The way you used too

 

Because

No matter how hard I try

Or how hard I cry

We'll never be the same


LOLOL

© 2012 sarah


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Forgiveness is rough. I can relate so easy to this with my dad. Ive broken something that i know can never be fixed. I used to fret about it but I've come to see my efforts wont ever matter.

Also this was almost like a song in my head. The rhythm and flow was outstanding.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Forgiveness heals and brings peace. It is hard when it is not given, and your poem expresses that well. Lovely work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Forgiveness is hard for many people. It is sad. Hate and anger take from us in the bad way. Better to forgive and move on. I like the flow of thoughts and the true ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice write! once broken never mended!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

At times, a relationship is destroyed, and shattered into pieces, like broken glass..Hopless to mend and fix. This says it well.
Sad!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its a nice write!
I can somewhat relate to it..sometimes, no matter how sorry we are, we are not forgiven..and eventually we have to move on..
Great work Sarah. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this, it seems very hopeless and full of regret. It makes me wonder 'what could be so unforgivable?'

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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